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Pardon grammar* but I'm rhyming
When my shift was over, it was late
I ran as fast as I could to catch the train
When I got to the gate,
I was tired famished
I had not slept or ate*
The choo choo was full
I said boo hoo
I found a seat
the choo choo started off
slowly, it rocked me to sleep.
Next time I get pizza
I'll eat before I sleep
That is a clever poem! Poetic license takes care of the grammar!
ReplyDeleteHAHAHA.....good one!! I felt sorry for this guy too - accidents happen even to pizza!
ReplyDeleteHugs, Pam and Teddy
A very wise decision, buddy!
ReplyDeleteVery clever. Poor guy, that would be awful waking up and finding your pizza laying on the floor.
ReplyDeleteHari Om
ReplyDeleteYikes... yup, lesson learned! YAM xx
The picture, and your poem had us giggling. Poor fellow was probably dreaming about his pizza! 🍕🍕🍕
ReplyDeleteThat's a perfect poem for that picture.
ReplyDeleteOops, he is not going to be happy when he wakes up BOL
ReplyDeleteGreat poem!
xoxo,
Rosy & Sunny (and Beth too!)
That is a really good poem, and yes, that poor sleeping dude!
ReplyDeleteThat’s a great poem and oh that poor man :)
ReplyDeleteYou did good! Says it all, too! Poor guy! Man, I would hate to have that happen.
ReplyDeleteHi Cecilia, you captured that moment perfectly in your poem! :). Poor guy, it is like when you see a little kid drop his ice cream cone, it gets you in the heart. Have a wonderful evening ahead! :)
ReplyDeleteThat was cute. :) XO
ReplyDeleteJava Bean: "Ayyy, how could anyone sleep when they have a delicious pizza in their lap?!"
ReplyDeleteI love your fall header. And yes, grammar doesn't matter in poetry. Probably most of your readers wouldn't have even noticed!
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