WE ARE GOING TO MAKE A VERY FEEBLE ATTEMPT AT
HAIKU POETRY FOR TODAY'S
SUNPUDDLE
As the sun does shine
Across my floor
I see
Myself napping in the puddle
And find my furs burning
In the hot, sweltering heat of summer
Sincerely
Madi(son) D. Cat
(not) Poet Laureate
WTG Madi....just remember to move if your furs start to singe.
ReplyDeleteXXXOOO Daisy, Bella & Roxy
Well done!
ReplyDeleteThose are nice pictures to accompany the haiku poetry, Madi. :)
ReplyDeleteWhoa, Madi, that is one dramatic poem!
ReplyDeleteBravo Madi. Pawsome ode to the sun puddle. Clap.....clap...clap. Have a serene Sunday now.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes Molly
Bawahwhahwhawaa yep that's another winner..totally bad Madi..BOL xx00xx only joking :) xxx
ReplyDeleteMollie and Alfie
i thought i smelled singed hair... MOL BOL LOL do I have to comment on the poem? MOL BOL LOL
ReplyDeleteWe also love the pictures with poem. Well done Madi. That was the best of the worst for sure. Take care.
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteHmmm, I don't know if that qualifies as a haiku Madi...to me, it seems more like an Ode to a Sunpuddle. BOL Either way, it's pretty good! Thank you for entering our contest!!
ReplyDelete*high paw*
Oz
We don't get it! If it's BAD poetry day, why are all the poems so pawsome?
ReplyDeleteGotta love them sun puddles.
Hugs,
Lily Belle & Muffin
I love your poem with the visual aids.
ReplyDeleteThat is just PURRRRRRRfect Madi. You have pictures to help us get to the ♥ of the poem.
ReplyDeleteNot bad for a cat :) You cats sure love that frying in the sun stuff, mine do that too!
ReplyDeleteWow Madi that's hot! The poem and your fur. Have a great sunday!
ReplyDeleteBravo pretty Madi and hooray for fun in the sun!
ReplyDeleteWooohooooo! Too toasty for me. Woooowoooo, Ku www.haikubyku.com (Zoe's brother)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Madi, enjoy your sunpuddle :-)
ReplyDeleteMiss Madi I bet that sun spot feels great and we think you are a fabulous poetress! (is that a word??)
ReplyDeleteGreat effort Madi. Deeply felt, etc.
ReplyDeleteToodle pip!
Bertie.
That was beautiful Madi!! A diva of many talents!!
ReplyDeletewags
Jazzi and Addi
WE loved your CatKu!
ReplyDeleteYou look lovely in your sunpuddle, sweet Madi. Makes my itty bitty kitteh heart beat a little harder! XOXO from your bestest mancat, Prancer Pie.
ReplyDeleteWe thought it was purrrrrfect!
ReplyDeleteYour Pals,
Murphy & Stanley
Hope you put your sunscreen on! Nice poem! Lee and Phod
ReplyDeleteHey Madi!
ReplyDeleteWow, your poem was pawesome! I can totally feel the warmth in that puddle. Ahhhh I bet it felt good...no smoking fur though! MOL/BOL
Grr and Woof,
Sarge, COP
Very good Madi!
ReplyDeleteNot bad, Madi! Oh, that isn't what you wanted to hear, is it?
ReplyDeleteBravo! I think you missed that it's supposed to be a BAD poem!
ReplyDeleteYou are the best cat poet I've heard.
ReplyDeleteWell, I myself have no clue what a Haiku is, so that was most beautiful. Everyone should learn a lesson from it! Bol!
ReplyDeletePippa :)
Hey Madi, that was not so bad. We think you would make a great Poet Laurecat.
ReplyDeleteBut be careful not to burn your furs.
Kitty Kisses,
Cindi Lou & The Kitty Krew
Adam, Georgia, Bo and Gloria